My name is Sid, and I am a corporate lawyer at one of the
largest firms in New York. Some may say I am successful, but I never understand
why. Yes, I have money, but I lack a certain level of happiness that I just
didn’t possess. My life involves constant meetings, phone conferences, and
driving to and from work. For some reason, this morning would be different. I
had finally had enough…
Beep, beep, beep! The alarm seemed like it was angry with me
this morning. As I rolled over, I saw the time: 5:45 AM. I sat up in total
exhaustion and mentally prepared for the long day ahead of me. I thought of all
the meetings I had scheduled today and my mood worsened. I let my mind wander to
a fantasy of me sitting on the beach with a cold beer in my hand and no worries
of work.
It all of a sudden hit me. Why am I here in New York? Why do
I constantly have to have my phone with me? Why do I have to work 16 hours a
day, 7 days a week? These thoughts overwhelmed me and I thought of a solution: an
extended vacation.
I quickly got my phone out and called my infallible and overly
demanding boss. “Hey, Sullivan, I am not going to make it in today or, as a
matter of fact, the rest of the week. I am going to the Cayman Islands and do
not know when I am coming back.” With every word, the weight of work lifted off
my chest.
“Sid, I never told you that you could take off! We have a
huge case coming up so you better get your tail up here immediately. If not,
you can kiss your job goodbye!”
As I listened to his words, a quick smirk came over me and I
did something no employee should ever do. I pressed that red button and hung up
on him. I quickly booked the next flight out, and was on my way to paradise.
The following morning I awoke to the blazing sun above me. I
walked out of my ground-level condo and touched the warm sand with my feet. The
sounds of the waves crashing into the sand had such a soothing effect. I
quickly found a spot to sit down. It was under a large palm tree that provided
just enough shade to avoid the beaming sun.
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I sat down and meditated about life in this crazy modern
world. In my deep thoughts I asked myself, “What is the cause of my deep
unhappiness? There is unhappiness because of exhaustion. What is the cause of
exhaustion? There is exhaustion because of demands. What is the cause of
demands? There are demands because of authority. What is the cause of authority?
There is authority because of structure. What is the cause of structure? There
is structure in order to provide work. What is the cause of a need for work?
There is a need for work because of the desire for riches. Extreme wealth and
money was the answer. All of this work and exhaustion was for this monetary
item.” Without the need for these, I would avoid all of the above issues. I
quickly got on the phone and called my boss.
“Sullivan, you don’t have to fire me. I quit!” I hung up
without him even responding. I walked straight to the front office of the condo
complex and asked the manager if they needed a landscaper. With a quick yes, I
had my new laidback job.
I walked back to my palm tree, cracked open another beer,
and scooted out from under the tree. I got real comfortable because this place
would be my home now. All was happy in the world.
Author’s Note: I wrote this story based off of the events
from the book The Life of Buddha. I changed the original story in that this
story took place in the modern world of New York and Cayman. I felt that having
the story be told in a modern world would allow the reader to relate more to
the story. The main character Sid, was supposed to be Siddhartha from the
original story. He was a rich man who decided that there was more to life than
monetary value and success. He eventually left his home just like Siddhartha
did to explore what life really was about. The palm tree that Sid was sitting
under was a direct comparison to the Knowledge Tree that Siddhartha sat under
when he discovered the truths of the world. I wanted the story to feel a little
more laid back than that of the original. Finally, the paragraph about the
causes and effects of certain things is the same format that The Life of Buddha
used. Here is a link to the original story so you can see how the Life of
Buddha was written. The passage was a connection of feelings and events that
ultimately went back to ignorance of man just like in the original story. I
chose to have the root of all evil to be a hungry desire for wealth and success
since that is what I feel today’s world is all about.
Bibliography: The Life of Buddha. Written by Andre Ferdinand Herold. 1922.
That was really good! It sounds like your allusions to the original myth were really on point too. I think you did a nice job taking this story and transforming it into a modern one. Greed is currently a very widespread issue so I like that Sid changed his life around by going somewhere tranquil and giving up his material belongings.
ReplyDeleteHi Trevor! Great story! The first paragraph caught my attention for sure! I have always dreamed of buying a flight to somewhere with a beach and never come back... and I'm not even into my career yet! The best vacations I have ever taken involve laying on a beach and not doing much of anything else. I had no clue until reading your author's note that you were talking about Buddha, but yes that is what he did! He let it all go.
ReplyDeleteHello Trevor! I just wanna start by saying, great story! You used great details and imagery and I could picture the entire thing as I read it. I can 100% relate to Sid about wanting to just run away from everyday life. Unfortunately, I cannot just go to the Cayman Islands when I feel like it (but I wish!). I think you did a wonderful job relating the story to today. The hussle and bussle of New York definitely takes a toll on some. I think that even for those of us in Oklahoma can relate to life revolving around work and lack of sleep, especially us as college students. Work, school and a few hours of sleep is my daily life. Lucky for us though, we get spring, summer, and winter break. I’m not looking forward to losing those! The layout of your story was easy to follow and flows really well. You did a great job! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteWow. You did such a great job with this story. I love how it's written in first person. I actually feel the man's pain and exhaustion. I think one of the reasons that I like this story so much is because I relate to it on many levels. Although I am only an undergraduate student, I still take on too many things and find myself exhausted, and sick (as I am right now) because I don't set enough time to rest. But I like how your character, Sid, contemplates life and has moments of reflection. My favorite part is during the meditation. I find myself doing this a lot, actually. I think many people go through this. This was a quick, easy, well-written read. The only thing I noticed were a couple of comma splices/misplaced commas, but other than that, it looks great. Nice job on connecting it to The Life of Buddha.
ReplyDeleteHey Trevor, what a great story. I love how you changed up this old story into one that seamlessly fits with the modern world. I love you tile, even if my first thought was the answer, money that is, it was still a really engaging story. I feel so sorry for the lawyer, I think I would have gone mad with that much work and no break, its a good think he got out!
ReplyDeleteSince this was based off of the Life of Buddha, it seems appropriate that it's so philosophical. It was very satisfying to read about Sid hanging up on his boss. I bet I'm not the only one who imagined doing it myself. I'm guessing Sid will become a Buddha-like character as he sits on the island thinking philosophical things.
ReplyDeleteCool story! You have good ideas about setting and character.
Hey Trevor, I enjoyed reading your story a lot! I wasn't familiar with the original story, "The Life of Buddha", but after reading the author's note, I really like the ways you adapted the original to your own story. The imagery you used along with the first person description of Sid's emotions really helped me delve into the story. It really added to your story since I was able to feel the emotion of the character. It made me understanding with his decision to hang up on his boss and move to another location.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if Sid has any family or friends that he left behind? I know he was really tied up in his job, so I'm guessing he didn't have kids or a wife, but maybe he had some friends. I guess he will have to make new friends in his new home! Well written story. Keep it up!
Your story looks great! I really like what you did with your comparisons to the original. I thought that the tree one was particularly clever. I did something similar in my most recent portfolio story. I compared a man eating cake to rats. Long story... but it worked out! I also really liked how descriptive your story was. I saw the phrase "blazing sunrise" and instantly felt that you put effort into the descriptive aspect of this story. It really is refreshing and nice to read something that truly tries to encompass you in the setting. The modern feel of the story definitely helps readers relate more. I was always a fan of more modern stories, rather than the older epics we have read earlier in the class. They definitely are more enjoyable to read at certain times. However, there are a few that I have enjoyed! This was a great read!
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ReplyDeleteGreat job on your portfolio. We are really winding down this semester but you have kept on task and done such a great job with your work.
You did such an awesome job with using the original as your story source. I actually read this story as well and know that you paralleled really well. So, good job with that!
I also want to take a second and say that your story was very well thought out and descriptive. You had really great grammar that brought out certain phrases and made them seem like someone was right in front of me saying them. You also captured emotions very well in this story. Sid is a character I feel like I know very well now! My only suggestion would be to add more dialogue because you are really good at that. Keep doing what you are doing – finish strong this week!
Erin